Manuscript evaluation

$700 (50,000-word minimum) + $100 per additional 10,000 words

You finished your draft, but something isn’t landing and you can’t quite name it. The story works in places. Other parts feel flat, rushed, or unclear. You need clarity.

I read your manuscript like a reader and analyze it like an editor to give you a clear, actionable roadmap for revision. You’ll see exactly what’s working, what’s falling flat, where readers disengage, and why.

This is a full diagnostic of your story’s structure, character development, pacing, stakes, and thematic cohesion. You’ll understand what readers are experiencing on the page and what craft choices are creating that experience.

You walk away knowing what to fix, what to strengthen, and what to leave alone so you can revise with direction instead of guesswork.

What's Included

Deep, multi-pass reading

• A minimum of two complete read-throughs of your manuscript (and more for complex narratives)
• Comprehensive notes on pacing, character consistency, plot momentum, and story logic
• Real-time tracking of my reader experience: excitement, confusion, engagement, losing interest

In-line editorial comments

• Detailed comments throughout your manuscript showing my genuine reader reactions
• Where I was hooked, where I got bored, where I was confused, and why
• Scene-level insight that connects reader experience to craft choices

Comprehensive analysis letter (8–12 pages)

Your editorial letter includes:

Overall Reader Experience

• What's working especially well
• What needs revision and why

Big-Picture Story Analysis

• Plot structure and logic
• Character arcs and development
• Setting and worldbuilding
• Theme (if applicable)

Scene- and Craft-Level Analysis

• POV and narrative voice
• Pacing and tension
• Scene and chapter effectiveness
• Opening and ending impact

Plus

• Detailed answers to your specific questions
• Clear, prioritized revision guidance (so you know what to tackle first)

One-Hour Follow-Up Call

We'll walk through your feedback together, discuss revision strategy, brainstorm solutions, and clarify anything in the report. This time is yours to use in whatever way supports your revision process best.

Timeline

Within 30 days

From manuscript delivery to feedback letter

Best For Authors Who:

• Have a complete draft but aren’t sure what’s working and what isn’t
• Want honest reader reactions combined with craft-based solutions
• Feel stuck in revision and need clear direction instead of guesswork
• Need a professional diagnosis before line editing, polishing, or submission
• Are ready for comprehensive feedback that will change how they approach their manuscript

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Frequently Asked Questions

Because strong developmental feedback requires both immersion and analysis. The second read allows me to assess structure, consistency, and momentum with fresh eyes.

Yes, your questions are always welcome and addressed directly in the analysis letter.

I won't rewrite your manuscript for you, but I will explain what's not working, why it matters, and offer clear options for revision.

Typically 8-12 pages, sometimes longer, depending on manuscript length and complexity.

We'll discuss your feedback, revision priorities, and next steps. You can ask anything/we can talk about anything. This is your hour - use it however you want!

Additional rounds can be booked separately once revisions are complete.

That's okay. Many authors sit with the feedback first and return when they're ready.

Contact

Stop Revising Blind. Start Revising Smart.

Tell me about your manuscript and I’ll take it from there.