You're ready to publish... but is your draft?
Maybe you've tried cheap services that used AI, sought out beta readers who ghosted, paid for feedback that didn't give you the clarity you needed.
That’s where I come in. I offer manuscript evaluations with clear, actionable insight you can trust. See your manuscript clearly so you know exactly what to improve. Be confident in your draft before you hit “publish.”
Up to 2,000 words critiqued free
Here's how we work together:
Is This For You?
You're in the right place if:
- You've finished a draft but aren't sure if the story works
- You're stuck and need clear direction for your next revision
- You want a deep, honest assessment before publishing
This isn't for you if:
- Your draft isn't ready for another pair of eyes
- You're looking for line editing, copyediting, or grammar fixes
- You're not ready for honest, direct feedback
Your draft doesn't need to be perfect but it should be clear enough to read and follow.
Genres I Work With
I work with Middle Grade, YA, New Adult, and Adult fiction across the following genres:
- Dystopian/Post-Apocalyptic/Alternate World
- Mystery/Thriller/Crime/Detective/Suspense
- Concept-First Sci-Fi
- Adventure & Coming-of-Age
- Animal Fiction
- Fantasy
- Contemporary Fiction
- Horror
- Romance
I don't work with: Hard erotica or erotica as a genre.
Not seeing your genre? Email me - I might still be a good fit.
Sounds Too Good To Be True?
With everyone on the internet trying to make a quick buck off the next person, why should you trust me?
I get it. You've probably seen:
- Services on Fiverr that promise professional feedback but end up delivering an AI written report
- Feedback so vague it could apply to any manuscript ("the pacing needs work," "the characters need depth")
- Beta readers who disappeared after you sent your manuscript
You're wondering: Is this another waste of time and money?
Here's why this is different:
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1. You see my work before paying anything.
Send me your trickiest chapter/scene (up to 2,000 words). If my feedback doesn't click with you, you got free insight and lost nothing. -
2. You see sample reports from real clients.
Read them. See exactly what level of analysis you're getting. -
3. All my early clients came back for more.
Either for Revision Reads or their next manuscript. That doesn't happen if the feedback doesn't deliver.
What Authors Are Saying
"She found every flaw I didn’t see - from character inconsistencies to plot holes - and my work is so much better for it."
"It was like giving me a lantern to light a dark path. Now I know where to go next and why I'm going there."
"I was stuck on plot and pacing issues for months. After her critique, I could see exactly what was working and what was not. Absolutely invaluable!"
How It Works
Free Sample (No Strings Attached)
Send me the chapter you're most worried about. Include a few sentences of context (what happens before/after this chapter) so I understand where it fits in your story.
I'll analyze it completely free. You'll get a good sense of how I work. Within 48 hours, you'll know if we're a good fit.
We Connect
If we're both ready to move forward, we'll finalize a simple contract covering timelines, deliverables, confidentiality, and payment.
Everything is transparent and straightforward.
Payment is via PayPal Xoom or Western Union.
Share Your Manuscript
Send me your full manuscript via Google Docs or Word. If you have specific questions or concerns about your story, include those too and I'll address them in your report.
Receive Your Feedback (Tier-Dependent)
Feedback format, depth, timelines, and any follow-up options depend on the tier you choose. Full details are outlined on the service page.
Contact
LET'S GET YOU QUOTED!
Send me a message and I'll get back to you as soon as possible.